Under the name “Tom Gallier” I published a Heroic Fantasy novel called “Edge of Darkness”

Here’s the blurb:

Karyn of Ohmsford is a young princess whose beloved father vanishes while she if far away.  With the forces of evil arrayed against her, Karyn enlists the aid of a holy paladin. 

 Together, they fight their way back to claim her birthright, only to find her brother has stolen it.  Betrayed by almost everyone she ever trusted, Karyn must fight evil paladins, dragons, orks, rebels, and giant bats before she can rescue her imprisoned father and free her homeland from the dark plans of evil gods.

So, anyone have any thoughts on how good, enticing, this blurb is?  All comments are welcome.